The two biker behemoths rolled around on the floor, punching and gouging, while the waitress cowered.
What I found under the bar decided which team to back.
On the cell phone, I dialed 911 and [send]. I tossed the shotgun to her.
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The two biker behemoths rolled around on the floor, punching and gouging, while the waitress cowered.
What I found under the bar decided which team to back.
On the cell phone, I dialed 911 and [send]. I tossed the shotgun to her.
Love the drama and action in this!!
Thank you!
I’m not sure why, but I liked the way you bracketed send.
Well, on my old (dumb) cell phone, it had a separate button. I dunno, just seemed like the right way to communicate a button-press.
Oh boy.
Oh boy…good, bad, terrible? Scraping 42 words off your shoes?
So much story in 42 words!
Danke. The general arbitration didn’t seem to think so 😛
Oh well, I liked it. Some of my favorite authors are not critically acclaimed. We common folk like what we like. 🙂